Anna's Paper Comments:
After reading Anna's paper and leaving comments on her blog I can take away a few things. I can look over my paper to catch errors, double check I have all the correct headings, and be sure I have all the requirements. I know these things will help me within my own paper because it holds me accountable for errors. Editing another students' paper allowed me to see I was on the right track with my own paper. When I begin to edit for the final draft I think I will possibly add more graphs. Along with differnt forms of graphs to give some variety. I also realized I need to fix my own citations and add "retrieved from" and then the URL.
Casey's Paper Comments:
After reading Casey's paper and leaving comments on his blog I learned a few things. I learned again that I need to review my reference page and make changes. In relation to this, I need to add the year to my in-text citations. I also realized I could go into more depth in certain sections within discussion. These edits will help me have a more clear and consie paper.
After reading Anna's paper and leaving comments on her blog I can take away a few things. I can look over my paper to catch errors, double check I have all the correct headings, and be sure I have all the requirements. I know these things will help me within my own paper because it holds me accountable for errors. Editing another students' paper allowed me to see I was on the right track with my own paper. When I begin to edit for the final draft I think I will possibly add more graphs. Along with differnt forms of graphs to give some variety. I also realized I need to fix my own citations and add "retrieved from" and then the URL.
Casey's Paper Comments:
After reading Casey's paper and leaving comments on his blog I learned a few things. I learned again that I need to review my reference page and make changes. In relation to this, I need to add the year to my in-text citations. I also realized I could go into more depth in certain sections within discussion. These edits will help me have a more clear and consie paper.
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