Analysis of Sample Proposals

Textbooks- (1)
Strengths: Gives a lot of background on the topic and why it is a problem. 

Weaknesses: There wasn't a strong solution presented, instead it was more suggestion based. 

Nuclear Power- (3)
Strengths: Presented two clear solutions right away and provides many outside resources to support the argument. 

Weaknesses: Does not clearly state the justification for the augment. 

Meal Plan: (2)
Strengths: Clearly lays out the problem they want to address, the solution, and the justification.  

Weaknesses: Talk a lot about how many people do not think it is a problem and should not include within a arugment. There are also many opinion based paragraphs that are off topic. 

Ranking: 
Textbooks
Meal Plan
Nuclear Power

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